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Title: Chapter 19 Reviewer: Nalunelly2 Signed

Thank you for writing the story I wish the VL writers would have written. I got drawn to the Chrolli storyline because much of it was so honest about how relationships really are - the good and the bad. I would have loved them to finish it out in the same way.

You are doing a really nice job getting inside their heads and giving them an opportunity to actually try to work things out as real couples often do. I am looking forward to seeing where things go from here. 

If I could throw in one thing - I would love for them to actually address Christian's bisexuality because the writers have only used it as a plot device rather than delving into what it means to their relationship.

Oh -I also loved it when you had them standing with their foreheads together. It shadowed one of my favorite moments  which occured after some wedding when they were trying to work through the first infidelity. 

I am looking forward to more. 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, Nalunellly! It makes me really happy that people can relate to my story and that it feels "real". Hope you continue to enjoy! :)

Date: 02/24/2015 03:09 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 19 Reviewer: andc39 Signed

Hi.

I started reading this by jumping around abit. I read the first 2-3 chapters and thought it might be another story of Christian saying I'm sorry,it was a lapse,it won't happen again,and Olli just melting at his feet..Then, I jumped to chapter 10-11 and thought wow, a story I was looking for, hoping for, waiting for.

A story, where Christian actually has to put forth an effort to get Olli back (I've read too many, where Olli just gave in) and I was hooked. I understand Olli here..

Thanks and really looking forward to more..........

Date: 02/23/2015 05:35 [Report This]
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