Sorry andc39 I'm a little bit late with my answer.
Thank you for reading my stories.
Yes, because I know, that here in this forum are a lot of Non-German speaking people, I try it in English, but it take a lot of time and work for me to do this.
I hope I hadn't made so many mistakes.
Originally I wrote this story in german and I thought I wanna try this with her, because she is short.
With this story I only want to explain their separation and make it a little bit easier for me to understand it. She is planed only with these two chapters, but perhaps if I had time and ideas I try to find a way how the two man can go on.
Flora, Thank You for the new story, and it's in English!!
I really apreciate you doing this, it is much easier to follow. I still read all your'e other stories in the VL forum, and I am caught up with Aus Kindern werden Luete. I am behind a bit with England, but I plan to catch up soon..
But , I am really looking forward to where You go with this one...