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Date: 04/24/2018 04:46 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 17 - Recovery Reviewer: klaudiua Signed

hello.this story will continue?I really liked it.

Date: 06/08/2013 21:26 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 17 - Recovery Reviewer: mermaid Signed

This chapter deserves 20 stars!

With a story line like this I wouldn't mind if Chrolli had a child AND here the VL writers could learn how to bring SUSPENSE into a story! Please don't leave us hanging like this, now that the bad guys appeared...I want to know what happens next!!!

 

Date: 04/04/2013 15:06 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 9 - Giving and Keeping Reviewer: 7letcher Signed

This is really a powerful story.  I feel so sorry for Olli.

Date: 04/02/2013 01:24 [Report This]
Title: Chapter One - Homecoming Reviewer: philos68 Signed

Dear, where are you? your story is too good to be stopped at this point!

Date: 03/16/2013 10:07 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 17 - Recovery Reviewer: Nanda Signed

I loved your history, is very interesting with exciting parts and I'm very anxious about the another chapter. I just think that Olli forgiven Sadi too fast. Ok she helped Christian, but I was very angry with her history about her brother. She was so selfish.

Date: 02/19/2013 20:51 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 17 - Recovery Reviewer: dreamer271 Signed

Well, that's a scary side effect no matter what the doctor said, and the patient needs to be informed about this risk. But the incident led to Olli talking to Sadie and that's good. 

The end of this chapter made me very nervous...these men are dangerous...

GREAT chapter! 

Date: 02/19/2013 18:48 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 17 - Recovery Reviewer: Tagro Signed

Gosh! What are you doing to us and them? First you shock me with Christian's heart problems and then you bring along those hitmen (or whatever they're supposed to be). When I asked for getting rid of Sadie a few chapters back, I didn't mean to endanger our boys and Gavin... But I'm still on the edge of my chair and really love your story. :D

Date: 02/18/2013 01:29 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 17 - Recovery Reviewer: Ella Signed

Wow! This story is great and the new chapter is super thrilling! I'm definitely hooked! I'm so anxious to know what's going to happen next.

Keep up the good work! 

Date: 02/17/2013 22:00 [Report This]
Title: Chapter One - Homecoming Reviewer: philos68 Signed

Ok, I stopped to chapter 12 afraid about the result of the judgement, but liking a lot how you were describing the whole situation and the emotions of our boys. Now, the last 4 chapter have impacted like a train! WOW! I cried like a baby with the first couple of that and I'm waiting impatienly the talk of Olli and Sadie. I don't think that I could forgive her for the moment, but I'm interested about the reaction of Olli.

Thank you a lot! you are a concrete example of the enormous potentiality of Chrolli, VL producers should read your FF!



Author's Response:

That's quite a compliment! Thank you. :)

Date: 02/10/2013 17:09 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 16 - The Bitter Truth Reviewer: dreamer271 Signed

OMG!! This is not even on screen and chapter 13 & 14 had me in tears. And now with these obviously dangerous men on the way to D'dorf... *shudders* And although I'm against another child SL for Chrolli, I wouldn't mind a story like THIS ONE including how it ties into Ansgar / Tristan & Sadie. It would glue me to the screen, something that hasn't happened with VL since Chrolli's reunion....

Date: 02/08/2013 02:58 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 12 - Law and Justice Reviewer: Nanda Signed

Oh Man!!! You are so good, this chapter was great and now I will can not wait for another one. I really think that a trial like this is not fair with the boys... but I hope that in your story something good will happens in the end.

Date: 02/06/2013 23:46 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 12 - Law and Justice Reviewer: Tagro Signed

Whatever Olli was supposed to say, it couldn't have been any better. Loved his speech!

Date: 02/06/2013 03:14 [Report This]
Title: Chapter One - Homecoming Reviewer: Nanda Signed

I loved!!! I started to read today and a couldn't stop until the last chapter published. We need some SL like this one in VL... Well about your story I really loved, and I almost cried with Olli, the whole thing is so unfair for him... So I'm anxious for the next chapter. And i hope that in the end everything is gonna be fine.

Date: 02/03/2013 23:23 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 11 - History Repeats Reviewer: Tagro Signed

Sorry for taking so long to leave a comment. Although I'm not into "Chrolli have a child" at all, I enjoy this emotional rollercoaster ride a lot! Somehow I can understand everybody's reactions and somehow it was inevitable after all. Though I hope they'll be able to arrange an agreement everybody can live with (and Olli doesn't feel left out with), I think an agreement to please everybody isn't very realistic. Is it bad if I wished that Sadie gets into Ansgar's line of fire (literally) in the end? Maybe once Ansgar (or maybe even Tristan) could be useful to fulfill our boys' dreams.

Date: 02/02/2013 23:10 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 11 - History Repeats Reviewer: andc39 Signed

Really great story, All the twists and turns keep me guessing where this is headed..

I have to agree with a previous comment. This was not Olli's fault. He was against this whole plan from the start. Christian set this into motion before He said anything to Olli.

I am glad to see that Christian did realize this fact, even if it was to himself.

I am really looking forward to more...

Date: 02/02/2013 02:42 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 11 - History Repeats Reviewer: Nikam Signed

WHAT A BITCH!!!!! sorry can't help myself (lol) but your story is so great!!!! I read it entirely without stopping and I'm supposed to do my homeworks!!! really nice idea to bring up again the "child-and-surrogate" theme. im' so with Olli on that one; first againt Sadie who said she can't help but love her son too much to give him but put him in a terrible situation between his " parents and secondly against Christian who was so selfish, insensitive and indifferent of Olli's fears!! I know I'm totally overreacting right now but Sadie's promesses including a child then changing her mind is so crual. And poor olli who was against the whole idea at the beginning!! Again WHAT A BITCH!!!!! Very realistic and cleverly based on the charcaters' different personnalities and experiencies. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you!!

Date: 02/01/2013 22:06 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 11 - History Repeats Reviewer: lookatme Signed

Amazing, can't wait for the next chapter! I have the bad feeling that this isn't going to have a happy ending! I hope i'm mistaken! Kudos!

Date: 02/01/2013 20:07 [Report This]
Title: Chapter One - Homecoming Reviewer: philos68 Signed

Sorry, but I need the new chapter asap. I really can't bare another  long drama, Olli's fears are real and presents and i can't imagine a good end for this story. And I will cry

Date: 02/01/2013 10:08 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 9 - Giving and Keeping Reviewer: marien10 Signed

wow what a story ...I feel so sorry for Olli ..I can understand how terrible he must feel right now, this situation is so much unfair to him ...I hope Christian won't be overwhelmed wirth his fathers feelings too much ...but this is a complicated situation, though I understood his desire for his son, so it could mean he will hurt and lose Olli

I fear it will be as so often , everyone will tell to Olli how he has to feel, behave, understand und have understanding for everyone elses needs than his 

can't wait to the next chapter 

Date: 02/01/2013 08:36 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 9 - Giving and Keeping Reviewer: ncecho Signed

OMG!  My heart goes out to Olli.  Christian, too.  They wanted this child for themselves so badly.  Olli not even being allowed to see the child and Christian being stuck between his desire for his son and his allegiance to his husband.  Bad-very bad situation.  I hope Sadie changes her mind.  Great story by the way.  Looking forward to the next chapter

Date: 02/01/2013 05:39 [Report This]
Title: Chapter One - Homecoming Reviewer: Sable Signed
Bella has a lot to answer for. But fabulous read. Can't wait for more.
Date: 01/30/2013 19:02 [Report This]
Title: Chapter Six - Logistics Reviewer: dreamer271 Signed

I was happy to see that the story is back and I love it, so far!! Better than Dana & Hagen's surrogacy SL. I like it and I think it's important that the boys always manage to really, honestly talk about things even when it's difficult. 

Date: 01/26/2013 19:51 [Report This]
Title: Chapter Five - New Challenges Reviewer: andc39 Signed

I am really looking forward to more !

Date: 01/26/2013 05:55 [Report This]
Title: Chapter Six - Logistics Reviewer: philos68 Signed

loving it!

Date: 01/26/2013 01:18 [Report This]
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