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Title: Chapter 3: "Aftershock" Reviewer: andc39 Signed

This was (is) a very good story.I also enjoyed the other two You posted.

Well written and captivating,even if the theme is a bit dark.

Maybe, I'm being selfish (because, I really enjoyed this story) but, I would like to read more about this.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!

Date: 01/04/2012 01:27 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: "California, Here I Come" Reviewer: dreamer271 Signed

A great idea to send the boys to SF for their honeymoon :-) , I really enjoyed reading that part. Chapter 2 - interesting plot to have Christians former cell mate show up. But poor Olli :-( I've been wondering, too, how he and Christian would deal with such a trauma.  All in all a well written story - thank you.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!

Date: 12/26/2011 04:38 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: "Right Back Where I Started From" Reviewer: Chrollihusband Signed

I really enjoyed your story.  Hopefully, Chrolli will get a real honeymoon on the show.

But have you considered adding something more?  How Olli deals with the trauma could be interesting...

Thanks for sharing your stories with us!



Author's Response:

Chrollihusband, thank you for your review.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  You are not the first person to ask me if I could add something more.  So, I am considering it.  It would probably be a much shorter chapter than the current chapters.  I don't like my stories to be too long.  Or, if I can think up another plot, I might write a "sequel" like I did for The Detour.  It would be a new story that would begin chronologically where this one ends.  I'll have to think it over.

--wehotrick

Date: 12/21/2011 19:33 [Report This]
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