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Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Yaobe Signed

WOW....that is all I want to say... you rock



Author's Response:

thank you very much and thanks for the idea

 

Date: 08/04/2011 20:56 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Yaobe Signed

What a great poem it is to describe the changing of scenes through the day. I am more interested whether you can tweak a bit to make it even more beautiful by incorporating with people's emotions with the season changing....

Something like, When the exhausted streets yawn to rest as the snow tendering shelters them for their sleep with the people coming home...



Author's Response:

thanks and that line is beautiful

Date: 08/02/2011 07:22 [Report This]
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