I forgot to rate too by bad
OMG that was a great story loved it and it was super HOT!! You must write again and again you have whetted my appetite for your Chrolli stories!!!!!!!
Oh my, there are no words. You took all the words out of my head and into your story. So amazingly hot, and still in character. Yikes!
aww, that was sweet...kinky and sexy as all hell...but still sweet. loved it.
Gelybi, I finally got to read this. Wow, is it hot! You really work the fantasy in a way that is at once edgy and, in the end, "clean" in the sense that it preserves Olli's dignitiy. I hope you write more!
Gelybi wow. I love this. It was amazing.
I'm so happy with this comment! Thank you very much JP, it means a lot. I'm really glad you liked it.
Well.. That was a rollercoaster of emotions!
Hot, fun and tender, add scary and passionate.
What a way to celebrate halloween!
Thank you very much! I loved your comment, you made my day, seriously. You described very well everything I intended to include in the story, everything Ollian/Chrolli represent for me, and I believe for all of us. They ARE hot, funny, tender and passionate. The scary bit, was a Halloween gift, hehehe.
This was...fun! lol! Wow. hehe!
Wow! Thank you, Nitty. Your comment is very important for me. You made me really, really happy!
As Paris Hilton would say... "That's hot!"
And dirty. Very very dirrrty. And evil.
I loved it!!!
Thank you, Mitsaso. Dirty and evil is FUN!!! I'm very glad you liked it!
With your lovely comment you made giggle the whole day.
It's not exactly bobbing for apples, now is it?
Nice job, new author! Can't wait to see your next story. hehehe
Very fun and hot. Nicely done!
Wow! My muse it's my first reviewer! I'm honoured. Really. Thank you, Zam. I'm very, very happy. For me if you really liked it at least 10 % of what you show with this comment, I'm done. You are a special one, you inspire. I never thought about writing funfiction before, and I'm really grateful for your challenge, because it was a very big fun to write it. For you I was able to feel the kind of excitement I did not feel for a very long time. Thank you very much.